In My Sky…
In my sky at Atlantis, you are a badoonga
and your chest and bottom are the way I love them.
You are mine, mine, woman with white skin and small shoes
and in your life my infinite dreams are liquid
The substance of my soul dyes your head.
My sour white fluid is sweeter on your face.
oh reaper of my evening pizza ,
how solitary i believe you to be when you’re not on me .
You are mine, mine, I go shouting it to the barracuda ,
in the living room, and the wind hauls on my widowed forehead.
Huntress of the depths of my maiosh, your plunder
stills your smile regard as though it were not.
You are taken in the bridge of my spaceship, my love,
and my cacalau of music are as wide as the vuvuzelas .
My banana is born on the shore of your eyes of your peach .
In your mouth of mourning the land of sins begins.
Tags: poetry
December 1, 2010 at 7:56 pm |
New to me. ‘widowed’, ‘mourning’ sad. Lovely poem with much emotion and at sometimes aggression too. I hope I understood it well.
‘My banana is born on the shore of your eyes of your peach.’ I liked the image here.
December 1, 2010 at 7:56 pm |
My banana is born on the shore of your eyes of your peach .
December 1, 2010 at 7:58 pm
http://wordsworthmillions.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/the-pumpkin-story/
Sorry for this. Please delete the second comment.
December 1, 2010 at 11:19 pm |
Interesting..the last stanza was fun.
Cheers!
December 2, 2010 at 12:24 pm |
Interesting
December 2, 2010 at 5:44 pm |
A love poem with passion and climax. Happy rally.
December 3, 2010 at 3:14 am |
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Happy Friday!
love the imagery in your poem,
beautiful writing.
December 3, 2010 at 7:46 pm |
Delightful
December 4, 2010 at 12:32 pm |
woah!!!
the words were funny in the first para.
hilarious writing